atom01 talk:Home
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Page structure
1.Most important information can be found on the front page, but the layout is not clear enough to skim through and get an overview. It reads very chaotic.There are also some grammar mistakes and many things are out of place. E.g. “challenge” point should not contain the questionnaire! Look through it critically, from top (front) to bottom and think of a kind of “narrative” for how you bring the information of your project forward. --Tomek 13:53, 22 September 2011 (CEST)
- Your home page does not give a good overview of your work and what was added recently. --ChristianFriedrich 14:19, 22 September 2011 (CEST)
- Nice layout now :) --Tomek 13:37, 27 September 2011 (CEST)
2. The way images are put in comes out messy. Have a look at the formatting examples for reference how to make it all look better. If the diagram on the front page is important for you, make a thumbnail of it, or even put it full size in the page, otherwise move it elsewhere. --Tomek 13:53, 22 September 2011 (CEST)
3. Try to avoid adding pages labelled with dates. We are anyhow only interested in the most up to date content and the current state of your project --Tomek 13:53, 22 September 2011 (CEST)
Content
1. What was added since Monday this week? After working offline for a day you were supposed to put the outcome of your brainstorm back online!--Tomek 13:53, 22 September 2011 (CEST)
