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1. Very clear structure. I think it works well if you make a page out of a word in the description (e.g. intimacy, survey) that gives the reader more information on the details of it. --Tomek 16:22, 22 September 2011 (CEST)
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1. I would encourage you to think beyond the stereotype of the "park". Think of the site, not as a park (one of many), but as a unique, one-of-a-kind place. you can propose any kind of development in there that you think is needed in delft. the place can facilitate, generate, encourage any kind of activity of any kind of users. Don't let its stereotypical "parkness" limit you. On the other hand investigating down to the most specific details what qualities of the park are valuable for people can give you a lot of design hints. --Tomek 16:22, 22 September 2011 (CEST)
2. The idea of "control" (of the flow of people in your case), I find a bit fishy. Makes me think of a theme park attraction with a queue of people lining up to enter, walk through and leave, and a fat guy eating potato chips behind a security camera observing them. Or a big brother scenario. Instead, how about thinking beyond the park, what makes people come there, is it really in everyone's best interest to keep a steady number of people in the park? Or is it maybe that you would like to eliminate mutual disturbance, not the number of people per se. How could you make people care about the park and prevent disturbances?.... keep asking yourselves questions, don't fall into easy assumptions--Tomek 16:27, 22 September 2011 (CEST)
